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First, Then, Then

written by: Alan Mitnick



That mountain
you're climbing,
leveled years ago-
here, now a dog park,
there, a food truck war,
you look silly,
left leg bent up like that.

Alan Mitnick

Alan Mitnick

English Professor, guitarist,
non-Mob New Jerseyan
Alan Mitnick

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