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The Quiet House

The Quiet House

written by: P.A. O’Neil


“Have you ever been to the Morgan house before?”

Jake Jones, the younger of the two deputy sheriffs shook his head in response as they approached the quiet house.

Deputy Tom Kahne took the lead, slowly mounting the steps of the front porch. His eyes swept from side to side, surveying the scene. A child’s doll on the un-swept floor, a bowl filled with balls of yarn and an unfinished project resting on a lone chair, were the only signs of habitation. Kahne furrowed his brow.

“You think something’s wrong, Tom?”

“What–no, it’s just too quiet, that’s all… Mary Morgan’s got a little girl, that’s her doll there.”

“Maybe they’re just not home,” Jake offered.

“Folks around here live in a pretty close-knit community. According to the neighbor who called, no one’s seen either Mary or her daughter for near on a week.” Tom pulled open the fragile screen door and rapped on the one underneath.

“Mary? Mary Morgan? It’s Tom Kahne. I’m here with my deputy to see if everything is all right.” The call was answered with silence. Tom stiffened his back and cleared his throat. Again, he knocked.

“Mary? You home?” Still there was no answer. With a sense of dread, he tried the door knob and found it unlocked.

“We gonna go in?” asked a cautious Jake.

Tom nodded and motioned for Jake to stay close as he pushed open the door with a creak. The light in the house was dim, the shades on all the windows pulled down. They silently stepped into the foyer. The house was as still on the inside as it was outside. Deputy Kahne turned to look down the hallway towards the kitchen, but the light from the front doorway caught on something on the stairwell. “Mary… Mary—Holy Mother of God—it’s Mary!”

Both deputies stood at the base of the stairwell looking up at the desiccated remains of a woman hanging several feet off the floor, her lower body rested against the bannister.

“How long do you think she’s been there?” Jake mumbled.

“I don’t know, but we need to find her little girl. I think her name was, is, is Julie,” replied Tom, struggling to keep his composure.

“You said was, Tom, do you think she is dead, too?”

“I don’t know, Jake, we just have to hope…” Before he could finish his plea, a small figure peered from behind the corpse, hidden by the woman’s skirt, she was clasping the cold, purple flesh of her mother’s hand. It was Julie Morgan.

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