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Frosty Jack

written by: Rich



Surrounded by blue bottles all around your place they lie
You'll know when you're in trouble as you'll be surrounded by flies

You are looking slightly off colour mate
You're looking quite frosty Jack
Like you've been hit by white lightning
Quite literally in fact

They say that you're a diamond
But diamond white's become your thing
And you won't even see it coming
The men in black remove your bling



I do the London 'Open mic' circuit having been writing for three years. I like to confront serious themes and try to explore reasons behind certain happenings.

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